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miniature said...
I think what makes aftaab and noor significant is the very fact that it is never confined to any special space or place...

ebnossabil said...
salamonce - before being ebnossabil - i was "i river" and maybe still i am. maybe the strong WE you are living/telling it firmly is making me more and more khaki enshallahwhat you and miniature are saying makes me think of the importance of movement in reading and writing your eyes and hands has to move, you could not gaze to one word when there are words ahead calling you to come or you could not stop your hand on the paper when there are words before, telling you to go. maybe what bothers ahmadreza is school's fight with the movement you have to sit in your place, walk in the line.... ensha classes were fighting with the strong flow of language in our hearts this is also the challenge we have with the children in schools, when they are reading their eyes and hands do not move freely, once we were telling they do not have coordination, like a ping-pong player, in writing you have to be so fast, changing, accurate, you have to move life
quran says ن والقلم و مايسطرون maybe what yastor is what moves...

parand e nilgoon said...
Thanks Miniatur for your nice comment and thanks Ebnossabil I want to add my idea to your words ,I think the strong words that move hearts and lives are the same words that their writer didn’t pass many time to write that ! but it don’t mean that the creator never think about that … he/she live with this many times.And this is interesting for me specially in Hafez poem , that best words of his poems that people in the world have challenge with them the words that Hafez , live with them .when he use that words didn’t think about them in that way…

weeping willow said...
Dear miniature, Ebnossabil and Parand,You are all great in terms of "language authenticity". Sometimes I feel I have "Qibteh" towards you guys. What Parand has written helped me alot remember the days I was fighting against the walls of my chrysalis to set myself free, I remember the days I was walking with my beloved ones in Pasdaran, I do remember all of their "Lotfs" and I do owe everythings to them. Those days were the moments at which the concept of time and space got challenged for me. It is never like one year has passed since the days I could walk with them in streets. It is like now I am walking with them in Pasdaran and I still have their words in my ear making me be thankful of them. Whenever time and space are challenged for me in like of ways, I don't care about the physical settings of time and space at all as they've already got stuck in my heart.I love Pasdaran because of him,Weeping Willow, the greatest grateful ever,


ebnossabil said...
salam dear parand e nilgooni think it's all about انس and as you say when we and words are مانوس through life then the words are enough experienced and pokhteh to find and pave their ways to people's hearts
dear weeping willow yes. it's usually never like.


haji said...
besmehi taala to you all specially to parand e nilgoon. what a beautiful name i love the poems you write in this weblog, about a week ago, someone very close to you gave me two CDs for my birthday. i put them in the car and am keep listening to them in my way to work. in one of them the singer (it is amazing i foolishly forgot the name of the singer, (i think is the age effect) is singing the poems you wrote. any way i wanted to comment on hamrahan e aftab's place. it is true it has started from somewhere in pasdaran and later moved to a beautiful house in another part of pasdaran, with a extremly horrible naighbor, and later to tajrish and now to niavaran. what always made the house we were in so special was not acutally the building itself, it was the sprit of the community in that building. as long as we keep the spirit, no matter where hamrahan houses it will be beautiful. so please help us keep the spirit as before. the new place has something that the other places did not have, is the spirit of shahid rahmany (god bless his soal inshallah) and i am certain the his spirit will definitly help us all to have special community in this new place.

haji said...
salam i am back again, i remembered the name of the singer, it is "seraj". of course you may have guesed the name already.now a comment about writing. just look at yourselves and around you to see the most special type of writingand weeping willow, about your experince in walking in pasdaran, i am amazed why you think that way and that you feel you should always be thankful to a person who walked with you? don't you think that person, whoever he/she might have been, have also enjoyed walking and talking with you? and why should you only be the one to thank?


parand e nilgoon said...
Salam bar Haji I'm so happy that I have your look and your comment here. I think that’s better that the blogger managers put comments above of posts …although your comment is above my little writing …And I’m now over all the things because of your comment .really Thanks And I’m so happy again because I feel you enjoyed from that music.I have many memories from it. Specially in car ! with my dear baba and my dear brother . Always when we had this music in our car, we talked about this poem and this music a lot .and since I know this lovely community, I think a new Aftab shine from this poem. I think this beautiful spirit will breath with our community forever and this is one of my biggest wish that GOD like ever look at us.And specially thanks of Ebnossabil as you give me this “negah” I think so much about my مانوس words.And thanks again for your comment Weeping Willow … I really perception this saadee beyt:
یاران بهشت صحبت یاران همدم است...


weeping willow said...
Top Urgent, As you all guys write crazy meaningfully, beautifully and brightly, instead of writing we'd better change our trend to something else, for example something like working out, or I don't know what! Dearest Haji Ever,If you were in my shoes, I bet you would do the same thing and as you're not, you may not overstand what I mean. It's also extremely natural for me if I don't care about what happend for the one who walked with me as I got the possession of all events for myself at that time. That person may have enjoyed walking with me but for me those days go far beyond joy, memoire or experience, getting interpreted as the foundation of my current sense of serenity and existence. Actually, thanksgiving, again for me, is a complicated ACT of considering my position and myself regarding whom I thank which should be in harmony with my perception of my lovely and infinitely compassionate God. For me ,thanksgiving is not just conferring " thank you " to someone but it is like respecting myself and what happened for me flashing back to my memories, and helping retain my love of thanksgiven person and God. I love the way you write as it's by heart, the proof of my claim is my own heart on which your words rest forever. Weeping Willow of Guadalajara